It's really good, the only question I would have is if it's quite the right kind of style? It all depends on Va1entine's thoughts at the end of the day, but perhaps it's too 'rage'-esque, too 'Beast Wars'? One thing I noticed with Va1entine's original design was that it was quite neutral, it didn't seem to come with any real hints as to flavour.
It's tricky, though, cos on the one hand it's a good idea to stick with the spirit of their original suggestion/situation. But on the other hand, something different may be the spark of inspiration they need to define a new image.
Swings and roundabouts I guess, it'll just be nice to know which one he eventually picks
They look ok, but I never liked the scraggly paint-stroke look. It's overused I think, and kind of plain. I should be experimenting with more ideas so I can get better at logo making, but I'm too lazy right now. That and my computer freezes often.
You know, occasionally I think it would be fun to go to school to be a graphic designer.
Brandon I love how you go around fishing through the threads to find my comments and make your own comments on them yourself. Get a life, or better still- work on your online game I doubt we'll ever see