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Matthew Wiese

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28th February, 2009 at 17:03:30 -

I've decided to share it with you all.

http://mattthesage.deviantart.com/art/Hate-114404051

 
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28th February, 2009 at 17:07:53 -

Faved. Short and sweet, just how I like em

 
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28th February, 2009 at 17:22:21 -

Thanks Dr. James! You made me feel good inside!

I'm serious, thanks. : )

 
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28th February, 2009 at 17:32:24 -

D'awwwww.
 

			
  	    

 

  		
  		

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28th February, 2009 at 17:55:01 -

That was pretty deep I like it!

 
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28th February, 2009 at 19:05:44 -

Thank guys! : D

 
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28th February, 2009 at 19:07:55 -

When you said "hate" poem I thought it was literally going to be about hating someone. Turned out very different and very nice indeed.

 
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28th February, 2009 at 19:14:35 -

^^ thanks werewolf! Lol, I just realized that it does sound pretty strange.

 
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28th February, 2009 at 21:42:52 -

I thought the same thing as werewoof. But you should make it longer. It's nice to read

 
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28th February, 2009 at 21:43:21 -

To be honest, I've never really understood poems that don't rhyme or seem to at least be metered in some way... but that's just a personal preference, lol

Thanks for posting!

Now MY TURNNN!!

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And rock a little more than most
For though my thoughts be shallow whines
At least they come complete with rhymes!!

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28th February, 2009 at 21:48:40 -

Lol, good one



Here goes mine


I spend a lot of time at the TDC,
Feels like I'm doing this regularly,
It's not that I don't like it you see,
I'm just visiting and leaving like a busy.....somebody,

Yep, I suck at ryhmes too

 
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28th February, 2009 at 23:20:04 -

DeadmanDines and Mr Green, your poems are pretty good. They rhyme pretty well. : P

 
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28th February, 2009 at 23:52:39 -

Well, I boot mah browser and hit "TDC"
put a spoon o' sugar in me earl grey tea
Gulp and type and click and sip
Caffeine makes me go on a trip
Random rhyming to do with nothing is fun
I could sit here for hours and pound out a ton

I sit on my post atop TDC summit
My browser crashes so I get up and chuck it
People out teh window scream loudly and run
Buggy IE in your hair is surely no fun

I went yonder to google and checked out their stuff
downloaded chrome and said "good 'nuff"
later tried Firefox--came in a shiny round box
Hated its UI (Even though some think it rocks)
Chucked it out too, straight up the flue
Hit a bird in the bum and got a free squawk 'n' poo

I've settled on chrome and vista's not a wreck
As long as you've RAM it's not a pain in the neck
TGF's dandy and works fine for me
Though I'll probably upgrade when I've the money



EDIT: Changed... some words that might be considered a bit naughty. By the way, the caffeine thing was just what came to mind. 'Tisn't true. 'Tisn't true 'tall.


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Matthew Wiese

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1st March, 2009 at 00:37:21 -

LOL! I love that OMC! You should make it into a rap song or something, and give it to Rikus for a Klikcast episode!

 
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1st March, 2009 at 00:39:06 -

Haha. You know, that's not half a bad idea. That's how I wrote the last song. Just sat down for two minutes and put rhymes in notepad. X)

I dunno if I can rap, though... Could be even better because of that.

Haha, I just tried the first line in a sort of countrified-rap... if I can muster enough courage to put that in front of other klikers I may do it.

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1st March, 2009 at 01:51:32 -

Here's my Haiku. :3

I love TDC.
It's nifty and really neat.
I love TDC.

Here's my Poem.

I love TDC! It's much great! I enjoy it! Alot!
I come here often and do stuff! Alot!
It's a good place to be! I like it! Alot!
Yay for TDC!... Alot!

Yay alot. :3 lol

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1st March, 2009 at 02:06:13 -

Ah, I've been pwned.

 

  		
  		

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1st March, 2009 at 02:10:15 -

It's gonna be ok... It's gonna be ok... *Pats shoulder and hugs*

 
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1st March, 2009 at 02:12:50 -

*Sobs all over the carpet* Dadpoogitall, I just dry-cleaned these socks...

 

  		
  		

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1st March, 2009 at 02:14:23 -

I can't rhyme at all
So I'll just write a haiku
Let's see how it is!

 
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1st March, 2009 at 05:53:42 -

Here's my bit. It's from my book, Old Man's Tale : Sacred Heart. Goto www.OldmansTale.net to sign the petition if you havent already and tell others! I need 5000 signatures.

When there is only oppression and no freedom
Everything one does is considered some treason
When life is dire with no rhyme or reason
Those days we feel, hopeless is the season

When the day is dark and so is the night
Those days we give up the will to fight
When blind men cry though they cannot see
The world is then, as cruel as it can be

Living in a world of torment and pain,
How are we ever to stand up again?
When our shoulders are weary and weak,
How can we ever lift a future so bleak?

Even the shadows stare lifeless and cold
All we can do is hold on to our souls
But we feel our grip is now fading away
Cause here in hopelessness, here we lay

When sorrow is the very air we breathe
And agony encompasses all we see
Then life is dire with no rhyme or reason
Those days we feel, hopeless is the season

Yet now we rise, standing tall and proud
Against the dark storms and the clouds
Defying the thunder, our voices loud
Our minds now clear, unhindered by doubt

Too long have we laid useless in slumber
Of hopelessness and doubt, of blissful surrender
Though our shoulders are weary and the future still bleak
A new destiny for ourselves is what we shall seek

Fighting through life’s torment and pain,
We have hope, so are considered insane
Cause even when hopeless is the season,
Hope remains our solitary reason

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1st March, 2009 at 14:49:51 -

That's really very good, Wolf.

But it's not fair because you didn't write it spur of the moment. Juuuuus' Kiddin'

 

  		
  		

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1st March, 2009 at 15:07:33 -

Very good, Wolf!

 
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1st March, 2009 at 16:14:08 -


Originally Posted by OldManClayton
Haha. You know, that's not half a bad idea. That's how I wrote the last song. Just sat down for two minutes and put rhymes in notepad. X)

I dunno if I can rap, though... Could be even better because of that.

Haha, I just tried the first line in a sort of countrified-rap... if I can muster enough courage to put that in front of other klikers I may do it.



you should do it old school style, you know like accenting the end of every sentence. id mark.

as for the original poem, i think it has a very good message, its kind of similar to the racism message i try to preach, something along the lines of racism mainly getting its power from the people that try to stop it. when we think that having different times of the year dedicated to a certian group of people, its only defending the opinion that they are different from everyone else. well i thought it was kind of similar.

 
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3rd March, 2009 at 00:29:08 -

Let's try this again
I'll write another haiku
Don't ignore it, guys!

 
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3rd March, 2009 at 01:02:57 -

I'm busy deviantwatching Matt and James now. You guys need to see my gangsta charizardz. http://puzzleshot.deviantart.com/art/Gangsta-Charizardz-113238086

Now for a poem, so's I'll fit in. Also, deviantwatching was only caught once by the spell checker, and that was the second time, not the first:

T-D-C, it's where to be,
with the people and my homies and community.
The games are really fun,
chatting all day's number one,
I spend lots of time around here and I've only just begun.

Kinda like a rap, but I'm now uninspired.

*dashes away to the sleeping community project which needs people to make tilesets for the level editor i'm making*

 
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3rd March, 2009 at 23:02:01 -

Here's my poem for the Community Project.

The Community Project
Nothin but fun
We all sit
At our comps
Being together
To make an awsome game
That no one'll play
If we don't get it done
So community,
Let's hold together
Please!

Meh, it was hard to make a poem for Community project, as those two words are hard to rhyme.

 
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