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Matthew Wiese

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28th February, 2009 at 17:03:30 -

I've decided to share it with you all.

http://mattthesage.deviantart.com/art/Hate-114404051

 
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28th February, 2009 at 17:07:53 -

Faved. Short and sweet, just how I like em

 
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28th February, 2009 at 17:22:21 -

Thanks Dr. James! You made me feel good inside!

I'm serious, thanks. : )

 
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28th February, 2009 at 17:32:24 -

D'awwwww.
 

			
  	    

 

  		
  		

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28th February, 2009 at 17:55:01 -

That was pretty deep I like it!

 
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Matthew Wiese

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28th February, 2009 at 19:05:44 -

Thank guys! : D

 
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28th February, 2009 at 19:07:55 -

When you said "hate" poem I thought it was literally going to be about hating someone. Turned out very different and very nice indeed.

 
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28th February, 2009 at 19:14:35 -

^^ thanks werewolf! Lol, I just realized that it does sound pretty strange.

 
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28th February, 2009 at 21:42:52 -

I thought the same thing as werewoof. But you should make it longer. It's nice to read

 
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28th February, 2009 at 21:43:21 -

To be honest, I've never really understood poems that don't rhyme or seem to at least be metered in some way... but that's just a personal preference, lol

Thanks for posting!

Now MY TURNNN!!

I am a little forum post
And rock a little more than most
For though my thoughts be shallow whines
At least they come complete with rhymes!!

... Ok, not good

 
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28th February, 2009 at 21:48:40 -

Lol, good one



Here goes mine


I spend a lot of time at the TDC,
Feels like I'm doing this regularly,
It's not that I don't like it you see,
I'm just visiting and leaving like a busy.....somebody,

Yep, I suck at ryhmes too

 
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28th February, 2009 at 23:20:04 -

DeadmanDines and Mr Green, your poems are pretty good. They rhyme pretty well. : P

 
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28th February, 2009 at 23:52:39 -

Well, I boot mah browser and hit "TDC"
put a spoon o' sugar in me earl grey tea
Gulp and type and click and sip
Caffeine makes me go on a trip
Random rhyming to do with nothing is fun
I could sit here for hours and pound out a ton

I sit on my post atop TDC summit
My browser crashes so I get up and chuck it
People out teh window scream loudly and run
Buggy IE in your hair is surely no fun

I went yonder to google and checked out their stuff
downloaded chrome and said "good 'nuff"
later tried Firefox--came in a shiny round box
Hated its UI (Even though some think it rocks)
Chucked it out too, straight up the flue
Hit a bird in the bum and got a free squawk 'n' poo

I've settled on chrome and vista's not a wreck
As long as you've RAM it's not a pain in the neck
TGF's dandy and works fine for me
Though I'll probably upgrade when I've the money



EDIT: Changed... some words that might be considered a bit naughty. By the way, the caffeine thing was just what came to mind. 'Tisn't true. 'Tisn't true 'tall.


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Matthew Wiese

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1st March, 2009 at 00:37:21 -

LOL! I love that OMC! You should make it into a rap song or something, and give it to Rikus for a Klikcast episode!

 
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1st March, 2009 at 00:39:06 -

Haha. You know, that's not half a bad idea. That's how I wrote the last song. Just sat down for two minutes and put rhymes in notepad. X)

I dunno if I can rap, though... Could be even better because of that.

Haha, I just tried the first line in a sort of countrified-rap... if I can muster enough courage to put that in front of other klikers I may do it.

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