i do not rally understand what does "your future company" mean, (your imagined company?) but i like very much this pic. its kinda fun and i'd hope really enjoyable games from this "developer team" ;>
This isn't bad, the face needs to be centred more to the right though, it's not completely in the middle. Also... how about adding a splash of colour to it?
change the teeth completely.
Remove the gradient on the orbital sphere
Remove the overwhelming gradient on the ¨Orbit¨ text, it's much too compressed and needs kerning.
Perhaps drop the white light source in favour of something with a hint of colour? Especially on the typeface.
Alter the thickness of the orbital path? It should go thinner as it moves behing the face.
A little suggestion would be to try to lose the 'Photoshop' look of the typeface too.
That's much better. Still not keen on them teeth though.
Perhaps switch the typeface colours around? The lighter hue of 'games' attracts the eye more than the 'orbit' bit.
Looks nice, maybe the colors should be a little more washed out. You need to find a balance between the two. Strong colors aren't bad, but a little to strong and it might look like it's trying to hard. In other words, to flashy.
Also, like Circy said, face should be a little more centered to the right. The angle of his face, makes it a little strange that it's dead centered in the middle.
Gradients in this sort of art isn't generally bad, but in this case you might want to work on some of it, particular with Radials on the eyes and the little sphere(anything round basically) because it's painstakingly obvious that it's just a flat gradient.
Yeah that's much better without the face - lots more professional. Maybe add something to the inner circle though... I'm not sure what though, unfortunately.
Maybe you could incorporate the black / blue circle as part of the font, so have a circle for the letter "O" at the beginning or something and have just the image as a secondary logo?
The gradients are fine, nothing wrong with gradients.
The blue on the small circle looks like it needs less green and more blue though. The Hue, as James said.
I Don't think it's getting better at all. The touch of blue was nice but otherwise they're all to similar to actually be better/worse.
I say you should simplify the look of the face but not shading it, just black and grey. That way it wont lose anything if you use a smaller version of it somewhere.
Yeah now that it's like that as part of the text, maybe swap the two colours on the circles too so the colours flow a little better? Then that's pretty much there!
Maybe go for something a bit abstract in the bigger circle? Like maybe a white half-moon shape 10% transparent, or two, with one inside the other... I'd show you what I mean but I'm a little too busy atm
I like the first one because it looks like it could be off one of those cheapie labels that punk bands in my town love to stick all over everything in sight.
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