i do not rally understand what does "your future company" mean, (your imagined company?) but i like very much this pic. its kinda fun and i'd hope really enjoyable games from this "developer team" ;>
This isn't bad, the face needs to be centred more to the right though, it's not completely in the middle. Also... how about adding a splash of colour to it?
change the teeth completely.
Remove the gradient on the orbital sphere
Remove the overwhelming gradient on the ¨Orbit¨ text, it's much too compressed and needs kerning.
Perhaps drop the white light source in favour of something with a hint of colour? Especially on the typeface.
Alter the thickness of the orbital path? It should go thinner as it moves behing the face.
A little suggestion would be to try to lose the 'Photoshop' look of the typeface too.
That's much better. Still not keen on them teeth though.
Perhaps switch the typeface colours around? The lighter hue of 'games' attracts the eye more than the 'orbit' bit.
Looks nice, maybe the colors should be a little more washed out. You need to find a balance between the two. Strong colors aren't bad, but a little to strong and it might look like it's trying to hard. In other words, to flashy.
Also, like Circy said, face should be a little more centered to the right. The angle of his face, makes it a little strange that it's dead centered in the middle.
Gradients in this sort of art isn't generally bad, but in this case you might want to work on some of it, particular with Radials on the eyes and the little sphere(anything round basically) because it's painstakingly obvious that it's just a flat gradient.
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