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25th April, 2004 at 12:22:26 -

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25th April, 2004 at 12:35:02 -

greased lightning!

 
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25th April, 2004 at 14:22:38 -

Whatís that supposed to mean?

 
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25th April, 2004 at 14:58:35 -

Well, clearly it's automatic...

 
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25th April, 2004 at 15:32:08 -

what the heck? those replies confuse me and i am not looking forward stuff like that

 
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25th April, 2004 at 21:01:07 -

She looks FAT.
It would look better if you made the neck thinner.

 
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25th April, 2004 at 23:23:46 -

Is that you in your avatar MasterM? It looks like James Hetfield!

 
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26th April, 2004 at 07:21:15 -

It looks like one of those things where you draw a little body in a certain pose, and then paste a photo of someone's head onto it, which is usually a lot bigger than the body. Nice try, but this one just falls flat. Better luck next time.

 
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26th April, 2004 at 07:23:09 -

The backgrounds nice... Dont really like the girl though. She's only got one boobie.

 
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26th April, 2004 at 07:52:44 -

I think it looks good but the girls head is shaped like a mans head, which kinda makes her look like one of them "shemales".

 

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26th April, 2004 at 14:31:05 -

Thanks, Jonny. Yeah the replies are kind of stupid and I donít get them.
Snerlin of Neonair gave a nice critic but I totally have to agree. Sheís so not fat
@Buster (HES): Sorry but I also have to disagree here. Itís not like I am totally in love with my art but the shape of her head is female-and I often have problems with this shape but this time I was able to draw it correct (in some way LOL). Female faces are rounded-Male faces are not-they are like a box. This face is kind of rounded

Never mind thanks for looking at that picture

 
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26th April, 2004 at 14:35:38 -

To elaborate: She looks a little manly but I think it's because her neck is too thick - usually it's about a third of the body.

 
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26th April, 2004 at 15:01:31 -

Here heads 100 times bigger then her body. Nice backrounds though. I also like the colours that you used. Did you do this in Photo Shop?

 
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27th April, 2004 at 11:25:16 -

The proportions need some work. She comes across like a super-deformed console-style snes era RPG character. If that is what you were going for, then great. If not, her head and neck are far too large for her body. The pony tail seems to defy gravity a bit and her chin/jaw area juts out to our left too far. Her cheek (to our left) looks like it is sliding down her face. Look at where her other cheek is and compare each cheek's position. Some varied line thickness would help the style of the piece a lot. Think comic book art.

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27th April, 2004 at 17:00:01 -

She's in space. There is no gravity there.

 
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