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29th September, 2007 at 18:26:21 -

OK, I wanna know if you guys think it would be worth it to start up a webcomic with these guys. Here's a couple of "pilot episodes"

Also, I need a name for the comic.

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29th September, 2007 at 19:36:24 -

lol, that's oooooooolllllllddddddd!

 
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29th September, 2007 at 20:19:15 -

It's very sorta... anti-climax... like Dilbert, lol.

Btw on the last picture the "Indeed" should come from the mask, that'd be better.

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30th September, 2007 at 05:44:58 -

I think it's anti-climax simply because you think it's gunna be funny, but it's not

 
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30th September, 2007 at 06:27:27 -

To be honest, I don't really like it. Not much humour, not much drawn. Also keep in mind that a webcomic will likely be long-term, so you'd need to be consistent somehow and yet introduce change over time. I don't really see it happening with this comic (except "hey look, a new character. Where did he come from?").

If you want a name, I'd go with "Hot Potatoes".

 
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30th September, 2007 at 09:47:29 -

(The happy adventures of) Maskboy and Fred.

 
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1st October, 2007 at 11:23:20 -

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http://richarticles.2ya.com/

P.S. I think the second one was the best. The Double-Double! Hahahhahaha!
P.P.S. I like your comic. I think it could be good if updated always.

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1st October, 2007 at 17:12:39 -

These comics are AWESOME!!! MOAR!!!

 
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3rd October, 2007 at 02:28:56 -

ok, so that's 2 for, 2 against... I think I may put up a few more later. I've got loads of them stashed in a folder somewhere around on my HD. I'll just have to remember where I stashed the folder...

 
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3rd October, 2007 at 09:51:50 -

I'd say you should have more characters, and they should have more personality. Also I think you should draw all the pictures from scratch, not just copy the same like you did two times in the later comic
Also, you could create some better plot to the first comic. The pen idea is cool, but maybe something else than just 'yup'?

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6th October, 2007 at 03:00:55 -

Maybe something like this? -->
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So he's/she's like drawing the speech bubble and the yup in it. It would be a bit more
funny (but still not very unique actually )

 
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7th October, 2007 at 13:16:05 -

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7th October, 2007 at 13:17:52 -

I lol'd

 
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26th November, 2007 at 12:11:36 -

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26th November, 2007 at 14:17:57 -

Aww...

 
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26th November, 2007 at 17:28:35 -

The Zero Cool ones aren't too good.

 
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26th November, 2007 at 18:15:10 -

I meh'd.

 
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26th November, 2007 at 20:20:17 -

Haha! really liked them! If you can keep that high class of humor upp I would really like to see some more!

If this is the best ones, then... Nee

 
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27th November, 2007 at 08:06:42 -

High class?
I think you should work most with the characters and the punchline.

 
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27th November, 2007 at 09:24:29 -

everybody see www.beaverandsteve.com and feel ashamed.

 
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27th November, 2007 at 13:01:23 -

That looks awesome!
Almost my style (I think).

 
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27th November, 2007 at 14:04:35 -

Guys, I think you need to go to Humour School.

http://www.howtobefunny.com/

 
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27th November, 2007 at 15:39:12 -


Originally Posted by Chris Street
Guys, I think you need to go to Humour School.

http://www.howtobefunny.com/

Nice try circy, but that site is a link farm.

 
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28th November, 2007 at 03:37:54 -

O... k.... What is humourous about the first comic? If you had him uses his pencil to make the other guy say something, or draw himself some loot or something maybe... but its been done before:
http://www.stickpage.com/pencilmationplay.shtml
http://www.stickpage.com/pencilmation2play.shtml


 
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28th November, 2007 at 07:51:51 -

The first one of those animations was best

 
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