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29th September, 2005 at 18:18:36 -

did those in 1 day - modelling, texturing and rendering.

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29th September, 2005 at 18:27:19 -

(Redneck Homebrew) hahaha. Very cool pics.

 
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29th September, 2005 at 18:28:07 -

Thats totally awesome, especially the trees.

 
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29th September, 2005 at 18:45:04 -

Tnx guys.. and Critic? plzz there must be some, ive been idling for so long and back to square 1...

 
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29th September, 2005 at 18:51:53 -

To be a total nitpicker, on the first redneck homebrew pic, the part where the blue sky starts doesn't look as good as the rest, maybe the cornfield should fade a bit there. I can't find any real weak points tho.

 
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29th September, 2005 at 21:32:54 -

Fu**ing good stuff, what program you using?

 
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29th September, 2005 at 22:21:48 -

Sorry, but that's really good so I'm going to have to kill you.

 
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30th September, 2005 at 00:03:52 -

ok some quick constructive critism:

- i agree with hayo about the trees in 'Three Towers', they certainly look great!
- i really like the atmosphere in the Three Towers, there's a nice variety of scenery, and the birds are well done at this distance
- you've done an awesome job with the grass in 'Redneck Homebrew', but i do have some issues with it which i'll tell you about it further in this post

now for the parts where you could do better

- the texturing on the cliff side of 'Three Towers' seems stretched and blurred
- i don't know, but the towers seem to be old monuments to me, maybe they are? maybe not? but if they are old monuments, they could do with more cracks, and roughed up textures, you can still keep most of the texturing smooth though

- the texturing on the fish in 'Bluegill' is too blurred along the spine
- i wanna say that the colours are really bland, but that's jsut the regular colour of the fish i guess (i'm more used to the colourful tropical fish that i have)
- the fishs lips are too blurred as well and you could do with more definition here
- the bubbles could do with varying sizes\
- seeing as how there is visible seaweed, i think the ground should be made more evident, possibly a darkened sand colour? it the picture, it seems almost as if it goes deep into the abyss, but then that contradicts the seaweed, unless there's aa underwater cliff of course, which you should then make evident

- the grass in the 'Redneck Homebrew' is too conventional, add in some weeds, and change up the lengths of the grass blades more
- the trees in the pictures (the ones with the orange/yellow tips) look too cut out, use more anti-alias in this region if you can
- the frame of the wooden shelter is too new to match with the old news papers and old calendar
- the brewing machine is too rounded, you should give it more edges and corners
- the saucer seems to be a bit big don't you think?

 
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30th September, 2005 at 02:48:12 -

Thanx.. ill take a look at your points... However the details on the towers are there. But i cant aford an expensive render machine so its hard to get those at distances..

On the fish, the sand is there, but its to dark to see imo...

On the rest ur probraly right

Also thanx for the comments guys, and i still use my ooooold 3dsmax, as i always did

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30th September, 2005 at 13:52:06 -

Looks great as ever, but if I may add feedback I'd say that the shooting stars or whatever in the second pic look a bit out of place - a bit basic, perhaps, or not subtle enough. Otherwise it's all gravy.

 
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1st October, 2005 at 15:27:01 -

I must say... I like the paper on the wall in Redneck Homebrew most...
"Alien in slammer after fistfight with Bill... OVER HILLARY!"

Also, those renders are pretty proffesional. I can't give you any pointers...


(Btw, did you know that in Japan, people are developing new condoms which will be called Clinton and Hillary? )

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16th December, 2005 at 11:29:11 -

images aren't gone just placed here http://www.befun.dk/ hope u like this blue but simple design!

 
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17th December, 2005 at 04:31:39 -

Thank moses you're here. Anyone know what happened to Tina?

 
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17th December, 2005 at 06:53:47 -

You're welcome.

 
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17th December, 2005 at 09:13:35 -

You just changed your name for that joke?



 
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17th December, 2005 at 15:04:17 -

I can't see it!

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17th December, 2005 at 17:31:27 -

neither can I

 
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17th December, 2005 at 18:31:51 -

Box dude: You bet I did.

 
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17th December, 2005 at 19:04:49 -

No u cant see the images in the top.. but what this repost is about, is the site where they are relocated.. And about the befun design!

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18th December, 2005 at 03:43:40 -

Does anyone remember Jon Chambers? I think it was him who did all those girl posts...

 
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18th December, 2005 at 22:14:56 -

I think he did some, but Jon's were notoriously good...

 
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