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14th September, 2005 at 22:54:47 -

Just popped in to show a quick single page comic I just made. Took an afternoon, hope you find it amusing!
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'oh yeah? he's thrown a kettle over a pub, what have you done?'

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15th September, 2005 at 07:39:29 -

Perhaps I should have underlined 'walking' in each of their text bubbles...haa.

 
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15th September, 2005 at 14:00:14 -

Nice concept, but the jokes a bit weak.

Glad to see more fun being made out of religion! And nice name.

 
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15th September, 2005 at 19:01:40 -

Blasphemy, although I like it.

 
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15th September, 2005 at 21:18:16 -

Weak, dude...weaaaak.

 
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16th September, 2005 at 19:01:26 -

The body of Christ,
Sleek, swimmer's body
All muscled up and toned.

 
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16th September, 2005 at 20:48:33 -

"Perhaps I should have underlined 'walking' in each of their text bubbles"

perhaps you should have made a funny comic instead

 
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17th September, 2005 at 00:39:46 -

Great drawings, Andy is a good name too, but the joke is either not funny or I don't get it.

 
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17th September, 2005 at 05:51:16 -

he's talking to his shadow in the last square, u know...
Still pretty weak

 
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18th September, 2005 at 04:09:31 -

I'm not going to tell you all what to laugh at, but I can't hide my dissappointment. There are plenty of smutty punchlines out there in internet comic world, this was just my attempt to make something a little different.

Radix: I thought I did make him look pretty buff? Atleast not weak. I tossed up with the idea of having him wearing a cross around his neck (another contradiction) or have a t-shirt that said 'JESUS LOVES ME'...but both of these ideas were a little too broad for what I had in mind.

This comic isn't a sharp stab at anything in particular. It's a play on the phrase 'walking contradiction' which satirically highlights Jesus' inability to relate to his son, who is a representation of atheism and/or antagonism. I tried to do this in a way that wasn't simply a cheap swipe at religion, but a character based comedy revolving around the interaction between father and son.

I'm sorry to all of you if this doesn't live up to your expectations of 'zany' or 'oddball' comic.

All of you, that is, except MasterM, who is a homophobic fucker with no sense of humour.

 
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18th September, 2005 at 04:34:41 -

The body of Christ,
Oh, what a body
Wish it could be my own.

 
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18th September, 2005 at 05:08:15 -

I think it's chuckle worthy. Not your best, but very well drawn. I'd prefer a sharper stab at religion.

 
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18th September, 2005 at 10:11:44 -

Like I said, I agree with all the blasphemy, but the punchline doesn't lend anything to support Jesus' inability to relate to his son - it's a simple and ineffective pun on "walking". All I think you need to do to make this a good comic is to rub out the words and put a more effective joke in, even if it is a pun.

Maybe you could have had Jesus doing something completely un-Christian in the last frame, like swear at Andy out of pure frustration.

 
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18th September, 2005 at 21:06:48 -

"All of you, that is, except MasterM, who is a homophobic fucker with no sense of humour."

HOLD ON! What the fuck is that? You blame ME because you are fucking unfunny? It's not my fault you suck. And by the way: the graphics suck as well.

"There are plenty of smutty punchlines out there in internet comic world, this was just my attempt to make something a little different."
and you simply failed so better leave it to people that actually don't suck

 
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19th September, 2005 at 13:48:02 -

MasterM is a cocksucker.

 
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