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Blackgaze

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15th April, 2004 at 09:14:54 -

This is the new Spiderhead comic; it is a different style to the old comic. This is comic number 1, Fighters of Freedom. This is split into two pictures.

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http://www.newklear.com/spiderhead/SHcomic1A.JPG

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http://www.newklear.com/spiderhead/SHcomic1A.JPG

The text isn't the best, but the detail is nice.
If this has turned out ok, I may continue designing more.

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15th April, 2004 at 09:38:59 -

You should try typing the text on a computer, itd be easier to read
Its slightly hard to make out the details, because of the varied shading techniques youve used. Perhaps if you bolded the characters and things you wanted us to take notice of darker than the backgrounds, it would improve the user-friendly nature of the comic.
Its good to know your keen at comic drawing! Good luck!

 
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15th April, 2004 at 11:27:25 -

Looks wicked, but i'm a we bit confused. I have no idea who's who and what's what?!

 
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15th April, 2004 at 11:57:18 -

Lol, "eyehead"

 
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15th April, 2004 at 12:02:57 -

I got lost after "Fighters of freedom"

 
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15th April, 2004 at 12:31:59 -

yeah my drawings are confusing.
I have noticed that the link under comic part B leads to part A.
Here isn the new link:

http://www.newklear.com/spiderhead/SHcomic1B.JPG

 
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15th April, 2004 at 12:54:35 -

Just kidding, it's good. Nice drawing - why not convert it to flash or something?

 
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15th April, 2004 at 13:29:05 -

cool, i just bought some stationery today to start my own comic.
some suggestions for you.

try a ruler for the lines.
and mabye make each box bigger since your writing is fairly big.

and there are some grammar errors i noticed,

"Lost contact of company BETA"
lost contact with company BETA

"ok I might off forgotten to deactivate it"
ok i might have forgotten to deactivate it"

they're easy mistakes to make though

 
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15th April, 2004 at 17:15:22 -

Its not bad at all. You have a cool style. But you have the same problem I have with comic borders: there too small. Over all, its pretty good.

 
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