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25th January, 2004 at 06:58:25 -

So... this thing is not really an article... it's kind of a game... the name is: The Story Telling Game. The game is very simple. I will start a story here... a horror story... the next guy will continue my story, with a few rounds... after that the next one will continue his story with a few rounds... and somebody can end the story too... I want to do this game cause I see that not many people make story for their games here at DC. Perhaps this will help people making stories more easily. So here is my story:

It was a Friday night. The moon was shining brightly, on the sky. Alex and me(Robert) were walking in the park.
-I love you Robert... - she said and gived me a big kiss.
When I was with her, I feeled alive... I feeled that I could jump out from my body, and fly up to heaven. But this night changed my life. There was not a single soul in the park. Everyone was in their houses, it was late night, twelve'o clock. People were watching tv or they were sleeping. Suddenly we heard a strange noise from the bushes. Alex was freightened. She wanted to go away from the park, but I told her I want to see what was the noise.
-Robert, please no... I know a story... about the Dream Evil... - she said.
-What the hell is the Dream Evil? - I asked...
-The evil that lives in our dreams... if you look into his eyes, you will never ever have a safe dream again...
-This is only a silly story... there is no such things as Dream Evils.
-Please Robert, let's go.
-Wait...
I went to the bush, and looked inside it...

So people... if you want, continue the story... sorry for my bad english... and I know that this isn't an article, but I don't know where elsewhere I can put this... have a nice day

 
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25th January, 2004 at 10:07:15 -

...and they all lived happily ever after.
The end.

 
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25th January, 2004 at 10:58:12 -

Nice story, but I didn't really get it how it end. I´f I would decide, it would be like:

...and for a nanosecond I saw Jesus nailed on the cross. It was like a light of flash, and when it was over, Alex slaped me in the face. It wan't hurt so much in the face, but deep in the soul it hurt like the worst thing imagineable.
-You retard, she said, how... how could you.
She ran away without saying anything. Thats the strangest thing I could think of for the moment, but what I didn't know, was that this was just the beginning of many other strange things.
7: 00 AM Next morning...

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25th January, 2004 at 13:29:25 -

The story continues...

I was very angry because Alex hit me last night... so today, when I woke up, I went in to the basement, and get out my old little chainsaw(). It was a little bit rusty, but it still worked. I put gasoline in it, and went to Alexes house... she was alone, cause her parents went away to a vacation... good for them, bad for Alex... I knocked on the door, and started my chainsaw...

 
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27th January, 2004 at 10:00:52 -

May I write twice? In that case I may continue the story:

I couldn't think. I couldn't control myself. I could just see myself slide my chainsaw straight into Axels body.
The screaming. I could see her pain through her face. Blood, blood everywhere. It was awful.
The phone started to ring. I dropped my saw in the floor. The sound was terrible, but I could still hear the phone ringing. I started walk in the direction to it. I could see myself lift my hand, my own gloves covered with blood. I grabed the phone, and put it close to my ear.
-Robert, íts Alex.
I awoke, I had once again control over my actions.
-Alex?, I said, b- but I killed.. you. Then I realised it was just a dream.
-Robert?, she said, Are you okay? What happen last night when you looked into those bushes and suddenly disappeared? I was worrying to death when you didn't show up in school...
School? I though and looked at my watch.
8: 30AM
Holy no, I had missed half a lesson.
-Robert? Are you still there?, Alex said.
-No time to talk, I responded, I am late for school...

 
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27th January, 2004 at 18:18:10 -

This is not a good idea.
its going to turn stupid. just you wait.

 
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27th January, 2004 at 18:52:30 -

3rd person(?) perspective story mode...

At school Mrs. Crabopple busted my ass for being late but I was like 'yeah whatever' and sneakily fell asleep in the corridor (that's where I sit because I'm 'badly behaved' but I know it's because I'm too mature compared to those geeks) Anyway, I soon got bored and was doodling on the desk when all of a sudden the drawing i done of Master Splinter looked at me and told me to sharpen my pencil and take Mrs. Crabopples eyes out and stick them in her butt like buttbeads. Yes master i whispered and sharpened my pencil and sneakily threw the shavings on the floor. I stood up and entered the classrom in a trance, holding my little sharp pencil firmly in my hand...

 
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28th January, 2004 at 14:20:08 -

Mrs. Crabopple was writing something on the black board. Nobody saw me enter, because that day they were writing a test. I went to the teachers back, and said:
-Good morning, BI*CH!
-What did you say Robert?! I think I told you to stay outside until the end of the class!
-Did you? Oh, sorry, I forgot! But I have a surprise to you... Look here!
I attacked her with the pencil, but just before I could stick my pencil in her eyes, the bell ranged, and I woke up... what a strange dream... after school, I didn't waited for Alex, like I always do, I went straight home. I made my homework, and went to sleep... I had a strange dream. I was at the house of Kevin. Kevin was running from me. When I looked in my hand there was a Colt. I was shooting at Kevin. I was angry at him, but I don't know why. I runned after him, and jumped on him.
-Please Robert, NO! I didn't stole your gum! Please Alex! Why are you doing this? Please!
-F*ck you!
I shooted him in the head with the colt. Blood was everywhere! I took out his eyes, and played footbal with them. When I started to go home, I woke up, and find myself in my room. What are these strange dreams?

THAT NIGHT

I fell asleep quickly that night. In my dream, a strange guy, with a big hat appeared in front of me and said these words:
-If you can't do them right, I will do them for you... let's start with the teacher... I have good news to you... tommorrow there will be no school... ha ha ha!
Next day when I woke up, my phone rang. I took it up, and Alex was at the phone...
-Robert, I have bad news to you... Mrs. Crabopple was killed... someone stick a pencil in her eyes... today there is now school...
-Holy sh*t! Alex, I need to talk with you! Quickly! We are in great danger! Call Kevin! Let's meet in the park at that bush, today at 7 PM!...

 
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28th January, 2004 at 15:35:29 -

INT. THE OVAL OFFICE, 6:59 PM

General: "I hope you like the new console, Mr President."
Bush: "Wow, flashy lights! AND A JOYSTICK!" Bush wiggles the joystick and presses buttons randomly. "Bam! Pow! Take that, Sodom Hustler!"
Defence Minister: "It's Saddam Hussein, and you did that last week." Whispers to General: "This thing isn't live, is it?"
General: "Nope, it's all safe. Except for..."
Bush: "Wooo! Eat my nuke, Korea!" Bush presses a large red button...
Defence Minister: "IT'S NORTH KORE-"

The entire world is nuked. Fools. Didn't they watch Terminator? SKYNET IS CURSED, I TELL THEE!

 
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28th January, 2004 at 15:53:55 -

The end

Enough of these annoying posts about story continuation

 
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28th January, 2004 at 18:47:25 -

6.48 PM:
I was there, earlier than we had planned. The other two were nowhere in sight. I bought myself a cup of coffee and waited.

6.50 PM:
I was getting anxious. Where were they? Were they really dead? Did I really play football with Kevin's eyes? I finished my cup of coffee.

6.51 PM:
It seems like an hour has gone past. No sign of the other two. Where could they be?

6.53 PM:
A friendly hobo just told me what time it was. Why was time passing by so slowly? Has the world slowed down or have I just sped up? Perhaps it was that cup of coffee I took. I knew I shouldn't have touched caffiene.

6.55 PM:
I wanted to sleep so badly, but I couldn't. Those dreams... those horrible dreams. I couldn't face them again. The dreams satisfied the bloodlust I got from Mortal Kombat, but at the cost of the people I know and love. Cept Mrs. Crabopple. I really wish she did have that pencil in her eye.

6.57 PM:
I paced around for hours, thinking of what to do. To pass the time and keep me awake, I sat down and stood up over and over again.

6.59 PM:
My senses were tingling. I felt that there was trouble somewhere. I felt that thre was something I must do. Maybe that friendly hobo could tell me what time it was. But I felt that he was in trouble. I could not see him anywhere. I had to save him. I had to try

7.00 PM:
I heard a loud explosion. A mushroom cloud formed in the center of the city. A wall of fire was rapidly heading in my direction. I had no choice. I had to either flee or hide. I could not outr-

(fade-out to red)

 
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28th January, 2004 at 21:01:41 -

...and then everyone on the daily click came into my concentration camp and died and the world was a better place. The End.

 
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29th January, 2004 at 02:24:32 -

Epilogue
Sandra, a sexy undead enchantress, decided that Muz was cute and wanted to spend the rest of her undead life with him. She spent several years working on resurrecting the fallen creature. She succeeded but didn't realise that Muz was hungry for revenge.
Muz pushed aside the Sandra and shambled towards the fotress of the evil Necropixel, bent on the destruction of the being who ended his life.
Sandra cried, "Stop! Come and join me! Together we shall be happy in the realm of undeath!"
"No, I must stop the evil Necropixel and avenge my lost brothers (and sisters)!"
"I'll upgrade your parts. I could assemble a chainsaw on one of your hands."
With that, Muz stayed with her, awaiting the day when he can get a chainsaw attached to his hand.

With the death of one tale, an epic begins...

 
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29th January, 2004 at 12:00:47 -

7: 30 PM:
Kevin... was lying unconcios on the floor of Alexes room. The blood was clearly dropping from his mouth.
-Did... did I really do that?, I asked no one specific. Kicking him in the face was a very stupid idea, even if it wasn't I who did it. But I couldn't trick anyone, nor myself.

7: 01 PM the same day:
-Robert, Alex shouted at me, wake up! Whilst I raised myself from the parkbench, I was getting back to my conciosness
I reflected the least detail of my dream. The freakiest part was undoubtly the one with Muz (no offense Muz ).
-You called us? Kevin asked bothered.
-Uhmm yeah, I responded slowly, Yeah I had those freakie dream lately and...
Kevin sighed and started to walk away, but Alex stoped him by grabing his arm.
-Pardon me, he said while pushing away Alex arm, But I have more important things on mat...
-Look I tld you, Alex interupted him and looked angrily at me, to not look in the bushes. Why did you do that?
-Well, Kevin said, nice to meet you. I just...
-You stay here, Alex said and he backed away a bit but choiced not to leave.
-I was just, I said, You know, curios and...
-Well, Alex interupted me this time, Now you are possesed by the DreamEvil and we can't do something about it.
-Pardon me, Kevin said, but can you tell me wha...
-Be quite when we are talking, Alex cried at him again while he looked more and more confused.
-Well, I said again, maybe if we find the DreamEvil, we can force it to take away this curse.
-Well, she responded quite doubtful, It is worth an attempt, at least.
-Pardon me, Kevin dared to talk again quite frighten of some reason, But what exactly am I doing her with yo...
-I told you to be quite, Alex cried at him yet another time, caused him to fall.
While Kevin helped himself off the mud, me and Alex looked for sign of life in the vegetation. Silence, silence everywhere. Nothing was moving, and nothing was there.
-Look, Alex said and pointed somwhere, Look over there
-Where? I asked her confused but yet excited
-There, she ccried, also excited
-May I please leave? Kevin asked us, but no one responded, because now I saw it. Something was moving in the bush. The same bush which that DreamEvil was hiding himself behind. I didn't think anything. I didn't hear what Alex said. I just jumped into the bush, and the next thing I know I was screaming out of pain.
-Robert, Alex cried worried, Whats going on?
I didn't answer her. I was too busy throwing away that wild beaver I made angry.
-Well how about that? Kevin responded quikly, Whatever that DreamEvil thing was, I am sure you have scared it away.
-Didn't I tol... Alex said but stopped of some reason, Wait why are Kevin here at all? She asked
-Well, I responded, If you want to know, come over here Alex. Alex didn't question me and walked near me. I whispered to her the whole story, about my dreams, about the killings.
Alex seemed shocked.
-I demand you to tell me what you told her, Kevin said.
-I don't want to hear anymore yell from you, she said, come with me, I have a new idea.
7: 25 P; at Alexes house:
She opened the drawer, and grabed a silver pocketwatch and a booked titled:

HYPNOTISEING FOR NOOBS
-No way, I responded without her even saying anything, I am not joining your kind of voodoo.
-Do you have any other suggestions? she asked, and I admitted I hadn't.
So I saty down on one of her chairs, and the process begun.
-Do you see the watch? Alex said and I nodded, good, follow its movement. Concentrate hard in it. You will notice it move slower... and slower. Keep following its movement, her voice was reapiting awfuly in my head, but I kept focusing in what now more seemed like the only star in space, ...And you will now fall into trance.
VOOM! I was there. The day when it happened. It was going much faster, but now I was experienced every nanosecond. I saw myself move closer and closer, and... now I saw it. But... I remembered Jesus. That wasn't Jesus. I wasn't even anything on a crucifix. It was eyes. But not the eyes I had expected when I heard Alex said "... if you look into his eyes, you...". I had expected the kind of eyes I saw in my latest dream, the red, dark Muz eyes (once again, no offence Muz). This, was regular human eyes.
I didn't have more time to think. In just that moment, I awoke by my own cry, and saw my own foot fly, straight to Kevins head.
-Robert NO, Alex said, but it was too late. Now, Kevin was lying there.
I didn't believe I had hit my girlfriends brother. But now one word popped into my head.
-Jesus, I said
-What? Alex asked confused, Robert, what are you up to?
I had no time to answer. I was running. I wanted an end of this. And I knew exactly where to turn myself to: The townchurch.

Sorry for the bad spelling too, and sorry Muz if I offended you.

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29th January, 2004 at 13:52:12 -

I ran, and ran, and ran, but suddenly a strange guy, with that big hat, what I saw in my dream jumped in front of me... what the hell? Is this a dream again? What's happening?
-Can you please give me some money dear boy? I haven't eated in a week...
This was only a hobo... I felt relaxed... I put my hand in my pocket, and searched for money, but the man said:
-Or if you prefer, I go, and kill Alex, and eat his brains...
I got scared! Very scared! I wanted to punch him, but when I did it, my hand went through his body, like he wasn't even there...
-What do you want from me?! - I yelled. - What are you?!
H started to sing:
-Five little indians, are singing in a tree...
-Shut up!
-One little indian is killed by a... PENCIL!
-What?!
-Hehehe... this is my favourite song... you know, I really like murders with pencils... the bad thing is, that in one persons mind, I can only use it once... and I already did it... so... let's see.. who do you want next?
-Noone! Just leave!
-Hehehe... I think you don't understand something... I am traped here! Do you think I want to play with silly little boys? I have to kill.. pardon... YOU have to kill five people before I leave... one is already dead...
-What are you saying?! Did I kill the teacher?!
-Hmm... yes! - he smiled. - Do you want to kill Alex, or Kevin next?!
-GO AWAY!
-Okay, then... I will choose... good bye!
-No, wait!!
I awoke in the streets, near another hobo... I didn't know what to do?! Perhaps Alex or Kevin is already dead... then I should go in the townchurch to meet Priest Peter. But what if I could save one of them... this can't be happening! Not to me! Suddenly I fell asleep again... in my dream I was at the church... I was talking with the Priest... I didn't hear what I say, but suddenly the priest started to run! Run into the church! The dream evil appeared in front of him(the man with the hat), but the priest run past him, like the evil wasn't even there...
-Hmm... Kevin was hard to kill, but I... hmm.. You did it... good work... two down, three to go! Let's see how will the life of the little priest end... suddenly I found myself in the church. The priest was standing near the altar. An inner power controled my hand, I grabbed a cross, and stick it in the priests head... he died... and suddenly I was awake again... but where to go now?

(Sorry for my bad english!)

 
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