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21st July, 2009 at 19:45:01 -

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A little constructive criticism never hurt anyone!

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21st July, 2009 at 19:46:54 -

I can't see it because of my dumb internet filter.

 
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21st July, 2009 at 20:06:20 -

Looks nice! From what I can see the walking animation looks good but I would like to see it in motion before I can really tell. Here's a link to a free online GIF maker if you need one. http://gifmake.com/

 
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21st July, 2009 at 21:08:43 -

Looks very nice =, but i'm not fan of non-black outline

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21st July, 2009 at 23:49:01 -

I feel the leaf thing on her head is too big. For example, look at this picture of Gardevoir:

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Then Again, maybe I'm just seeing things. It's still pretty good. I didn't even realize Gardevoir had legs.

 
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22nd July, 2009 at 02:47:28 -

It looks good! But the shading is incomplete on the bottom row. I'm sure you knew that though.

 

  		
  		

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22nd July, 2009 at 05:44:03 -


Originally Posted by Not A Taco
I feel the leaf thing on her head is too big. For example, look at this picture of Gardevoir:

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Then Again, maybe I'm just seeing things. It's still pretty good. I didn't even realize Gardevoir had legs.



Yeah, they have legs. It's just rarely shown. And leaf things? Is that her hair? Her "cheek spikes"?

And yes, OldmanClayton, I just wanted an opinion on it before I keep going.

 
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22nd July, 2009 at 12:57:39 -

I like alot, the animation seems smooth and the sprites are constructed very well. Only thing I would say is to use more pastel colours because the hair seems way to bright.

Nevertheless I'm digging it.

 
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22nd July, 2009 at 18:33:25 -

Her hair, but I think it might just be me.

 
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22nd July, 2009 at 23:35:44 -


Originally Posted by <Joel><Poobical>
I like alot, the animation seems smooth and the sprites are constructed very well. Only thing I would say is to use more pastel colours because the hair seems way to bright.

Nevertheless I'm digging it.



Thank you so much! When I'm done with all the poses, I'll come back with the new picture for more criticism!

Cheers!

Oh, BTW, if anyone wants to use this, they can. Enjoy!

 
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24th July, 2009 at 01:19:54 -

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How is this?

 
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24th July, 2009 at 02:40:11 -

That is awesome! What move? To tell the truth, her hands seem a bit too big here.

 
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24th July, 2009 at 02:50:26 -

Too big? Hmm...Maybe it is...

I'll see what I can do...

Oh, that move is her shooting basic psychic bullets.

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24th July, 2009 at 15:26:20 -

Projectile is coming from behind the bottom right corner of her hand, a rather awkward place for someone to focus and create energy from, it seems.

 
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24th July, 2009 at 17:16:46 -


Originally Posted by herooftime1000

A little constructive criticism never hurt anyone!


The download section says otherwise.

 
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