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Jon C-B

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5th July, 2009 at 20:39:09 -

Today I was messing around with a grass platform and made this. Image I think it looks pretty good, what do you guys think?

 
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5th July, 2009 at 21:31:18 -

Good effort, though if that brown line under the grass is supposed to be a shadow, i'd make it hang down a little longer. I like the grass blades alot!

 
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5th July, 2009 at 22:03:35 -

The shadow wouldn't get darker the further away it is.

 
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5th July, 2009 at 22:07:13 -

I just thought it looked too much like an outline, rather than a shadow, that's all. Maybe make it fall longer down but slightly lighter in colour and less contrasting

 
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5th July, 2009 at 23:13:52 -

I think the dirt and the grass could use some details inside. it looks a bit bland. like little pebbles and blades of grass.

 
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5th July, 2009 at 23:37:26 -

Looks nice and 3D-ish if you're going for a cartoon effect. Like a little box. If you want it to float in the air I think it's ok. (but could use a few more details like Devernath said) If it will always be on the "ground" then you may want to just be rid of the shading at the bottom.

Good for some styles, could be better for others. Depends on what you're aiming for!

 

  		
  		

Jon C-B

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6th July, 2009 at 00:41:54 -

Thanks for all the replys. I've done a small update on the brown shadow. Image

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