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18th June, 2009 at 18:50:20 -

This is some vague art I made for a game I am working on. Feel Free to comment. I really hope nobody took this name...

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18th June, 2009 at 19:04:30 -

Can't read what's written
Metal All---ce?

The gear looks great. Your edges would need to be shaded though.

 
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18th June, 2009 at 19:14:00 -

Everything looks cool except for the words. You should never have a font that takes longer than two seconds to read (and that's a lenient standard) and that's not even readable. It looks like Metal Alliance but it needs to be redone.

Also, your site doesn't work.

Got any more to show us?

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18th June, 2009 at 19:23:11 -

It looks great, although I think the second word of the title could be a little clearer... Other than that well done! I'm such a sucker for yellowish/brownish/orangey and black colour schemes x)

 
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18th June, 2009 at 19:26:52 -

That would be Metal Alliance.

 
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18th June, 2009 at 19:32:13 -

Oh I meant to write Mechanical Alliance I made a silver version. I really just threw some stuff together. I don't have it on this computer. I'll have to wait until I get home. Currently I am at my dad's office. Also it's not a link in my signature. I don't know how to add links. Here paste this into your browser: http://ysfmedia.com/

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20th June, 2009 at 03:42:40 -

As said before, it looks great minus the text. Readability is very important for a game.

 
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28th June, 2009 at 22:25:01 -

Here's the improved version of the original:
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And another version: (If I make a sequel)
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29th June, 2009 at 02:21:01 -

Excellent Text is much easier to read.

 
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13th July, 2009 at 17:18:13 -

Nice Photoshop mash-up, and good uses here and there of bevels and such, but for improvment i'd have to recommend cleaning up the edges, and i'd have to honestly say the grey version if pales in comparison to your improved orange image.
Would you be able to explain how you created the large circular gradient on the orange one, it does look very nice and effective.
The text is real nice for the grey one, but the sharpened pixels and the "Noise" glow around the red gear mainly spoils it.
other than that, keep developing it further

 
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13th July, 2009 at 21:33:43 -

I used the lense flare in Illustrator for the gradient, then combined a bunch of pictures. Also I used Fireworks.Actually, I'm took a break on this game actually. I tried to make a unique engine somewhere between a top down shooter and strategy game, but it didn't work out well.

 
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