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24th November, 2006 at 12:33:24 -
Next time you fall in love it better be with me the way it used to be
Back then was when we touched the star light
The "colourised" one I found just pointed out the red blood
Everything else was black and white
He'll be gone soon
That pocket monster is hard to catch
He was referring to the following line:
"And rejoice as you breath your final breath!"
The error, highlighted.
"Breath," he spoke. Not breathe.
Pouncing upon this fatal flaw,
The mistake, Laz's, not Tim's.
Quiet now children.
This poem has no rhyme.
I hope it makes you all bleed.
This thread is getting rather boring
These poems are really quite bad
Almost as bad as my snoring,
And yes I'm really quite mad.
So shall I help you all out
With a tommy gun to kill you guys?
I swear it packs quite a clout
You'll soon start dropping like flies.
If you want a real poet
I think you should look to me
I'll knock one up before you know it
You'll be green with total envy.
Maybe it's time once again
For the Circy Signature Rap?
Let's flush this thread down the drain
along with all the other crap.
Well now its near my bedtime
I'd better go, I've got work.
This poem is so damn sublime
Written by a complete berk.
This poem is too good for you guys
so I think I'll clean my teeth
It's easy to get very wise
Especially as I went to the dentist and it didn't really hurt as much as I expected apart from the sheer fear I have of dentists and I think I'm going to bed now because I'm tired Goodnight cruel world.