These are a few pics i did for a game im making, the games an RPG with a twist, you get to change the players sanity, pain threshold and anger by mutilating him with painful additions... its kinda hard to explain, anyways let me know what you think.
First one has alright shading, but the lineart is crap.
Second one is much better in that respect, though there's something wrong with the legs. Possibly dodgey foregrounding, or they may just be too short.
good points about the proportions, legs are a bit off, top one was done about 2 years ago and the lineart sucks, i really fucked up bad on the stomache, but we learn by our mystakes!
The games comming along nice, might drop off a preview soon.