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10th September, 2005 at 21:59:02 -

These are a few pics i did for a game im making, the games an RPG with a twist, you get to change the players sanity, pain threshold and anger by mutilating him with painful additions... its kinda hard to explain, anyways let me know what you think.

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11th September, 2005 at 02:51:34 -

Not bad.
First one has alright shading, but the lineart is crap.
Second one is much better in that respect, though there's something wrong with the legs. Possibly dodgey foregrounding, or they may just be too short.

 
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11th September, 2005 at 05:13:08 -

seems like a fun game idéa too

 
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11th September, 2005 at 06:17:29 -

They are both very good.

The second guy's proportions are a bit off, and making the legs a bit longer would help. Also his spikey shoulder pad thing looks like it's almost pressing into the back of his head. Ouch!

But good work

 
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11th September, 2005 at 20:44:12 -

good points about the proportions, legs are a bit off, top one was done about 2 years ago and the lineart sucks, i really fucked up bad on the stomache, but we learn by our mystakes!
The games comming along nice, might drop off a preview soon.

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13th September, 2005 at 18:04:16 -

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