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AndyUK

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25th March, 2004 at 15:56:50 -

A black mage.
http://www.geocities.com/alspics2001/blackmage.gif
My original avatar.
http://www.geocities.com/alspics2001/andy5.txt
Some other things.
http://www.geocities.com/alspics2001/berin.gif
http://www.geocities.com/alspics2001/borj.gif
http://www.geocities.com/alspics2001/buzzwall.gif
http://www.geocities.com/alspics2001/dyno.jpg
I used this in a sprite contest at Natomic but it got ignored, mabye they all sucked up to the admins efforts or something.
http://www.geocities.com/alspics2001/mssb.gif

And here is a recent drawing of Tops i did
http://www.geocities.com/alspics2001/tgab.txt

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Cazra

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25th March, 2004 at 17:24:14 -

Geocities won't let me see the pics.

 
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25th March, 2004 at 17:36:09 -

I can only see your old avatar (the anime type character) and a hand drawn sketch of Tops. The rest are all:

"This page is not available.
We're sorry, but this page is currently unavailable for viewing.
If this site belongs to you, please read this help page for more information and assistance.

For general questions see our main help area, or search for other member pages."


 
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25th March, 2004 at 17:38:26 -

Dont click on them, copy them into your adress bar. Nice pics.

 

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25th March, 2004 at 18:12:35 -

ah, it works better now. Well done.They could use a better outline though.

 
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25th March, 2004 at 18:48:31 -

Pretty good. I like Buzzwall and ofcourse Tops, he's awesome!

 
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AndyUK

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25th March, 2004 at 21:09:40 -

"i can only see your old avatar (the anime type character) and a hand drawn sketch of Tops. The rest are all"

thats probably because they're .txt extensions.
even i cant see the gifs and jpgs by clicking on the links

thanks for the comments.

 
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26th March, 2004 at 06:40:00 -

Hey yeah, I can see them now that Ive copied and pasted them into the address bar. Shall I crit each individually? Methinks so...

Blackmage:
I can see your going for a rather obscure angle here. Nothing wrong with that, if you get it right. You should start either making the thick black outline consistent, or just a single pixel thick. The dithering on the feet shouldnt be in black, they should be some kind of darker orangy colour keeping with the dithering youve used on the jacket and hat. Try toning down the colours youve used. If your drawing in paint than try choicing a custom colour instead of the generic ones. Also the hat should be hued down, it is really bright, but the shading colour doesnt match.


Andy5 (old avatar):
I didnt particuly like this avatar when you had it. Its hair doesnt fit in the frame and the detail to the face is too simple. He doesnt have a nose! This doesnt matter because its obviously on purpose, and a trademark style no doubt.


Berin:
This shows your best use of shading so far, however it isnt consistent. Youve not done any shading on the sweater, making it look rather dull.


Buzzwall:
This ones probably my favourite so far. Youve drawn it in a very nice retro style, and the character has a sonic look to him. The dithering works well. If I was you than I would use this style the most, as youve definately developed it. That is not to say your other styles wont improve.


Dyno:
Youve saved this in a horrible JPG file, giving it a rough blurry look. Try saving as a PNG. This is probably some of your best line work, but it could be slightly neater. The colours once again should be hued down, and the difference between the dark and light colour for each section should be lessened. Im also not a fan of the big dark patch on his stomach.


MSSB:
It was a shame the Natomi's ignored this, as it could be a prime target for critical analysis. It is far from perfect, but Im too tired to go through it in detail. Might have another look later.


Tops the Pig:
Well this is a sketch so its a bit different to the rest. He looks like he is supposed to be giving a thumbs up, but it doenst quite look right. The finger part of the hand (not the thumb) should be extended to wrap more around itself, at the moment it looks more like he about to punch something invisible.

There is definately some nice work here, but definately room for improvement. I understand I am being picky, but this is where we are suppose to help with artwork.

 
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AndyUK

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26th March, 2004 at 10:59:37 -

ok, thanks for that istvan.

actually i think that Tops the pig sketch i did is the best thumbs up ive ever drawn. But ive had loads of practice because 90% of my pictures are doing a thumbs up.

as for the buzzwall style thats the after effects of years drawing sonic the hedgehog pictures. Between 1991 and 1995 or something i didnt draw much else.

 
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