Wow, if that's a quick attempt, it's great. My only critique is in her fashion sense and the shiny round thingy at the end of the left boot that looks out of place. Other than that, it's great
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It's not really my style of drawing or anything, but that doesn't matter anyway, so forget about that(not the most important thing...). Muz is right. The light source appears to shine in the direction you see the character, but the shine on the boot hints that the light source comes from the front of the character. Again, Muz is right. Her fashion sensability is crazy looking. Also the stance is cool, but it's QUITE impractical. I mean who'll be standing like that for a serious pose? It's just not right, ESPECIALLY for a stopped animation(I'm gonna' guess that's what you had in mind). Bottom line. The shine on the boot is incorrectly placed, her outfit certainly is "Out of fitting" and the stance seems awkward.
Thanks guys, I upped the contrast & hues a bit, especially in the pants, changed her top & corrected the stance to make it look a little more natural..
Another thing... the baseball hat doesn't look too cool with a big quif of hair coming out or it with a up-turned peak, it looks kinda like a 1980's-early 1990's kid's TV presenter image. Personally I'd rather see her without the cap
That's actually what was I going for, something reminiscent of the 80's or 90's. I'm still playing around with the concept for this character so, nothing is in concrete as of yet.
btw, does anyone know if there is a program that I can use to animate this & save as gif?
You might add some whites and brighter greys and darker blacks to the gun to make it look more metallic. Also it does blend with the gloves. I would make them match her pants. Also the leg on the right looks weird behind her knee in the animated one and her hair should probably move when animated as well. It's really good though!
Also, you might be planning to add this as a programmed effect (if you're using it in a game) but some smoke coming from the cigarette would be good.
you are really good. But you want feed back. So if I had to pick. I'd say. The way you posed her has all her weight on the back right leg. So it needs to come up straighter from the ankle. Slanted like it is. It couldn't support her weight.
Just something to think about. But really it rules.
I see exactly what you mean.. I'll have to fix that leg. I've also changed the gloves to match the pants. You guys are really giving me some great advice. I had a little trouble with making the guns metallic, but I'll give it another try
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